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Anonymous 01/09/24(Tue)14:47 No. 3533 [Edit]

Following the witch: another hymn to Aphrodite. A poem inspired in part by Yume Nikki.

Any thoughts/criticisms?

>>	Anonymous 01/09/24(Tue)16:38 No. 3534 [Edit] File 170484712023.jpg - (14.35KB , 568x800 , Uboa.jpg ) >>3533 >Any thoughts/criticisms? AAAAAAAAAAAああああああああああああ

Anonymous 01/09/24(Tue)16:46 No. 3535 [Edit]

I'm not really into poetry. It requires effort on my part to not skim through. The mention of urine laced tap water, and sports-drinks felt odd. I think I get what you're going for, a dreamy, nonsensical atmosphere, but it still feels inharmonious to include stuff like that and name drop Greek tragedies in the same text.

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