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This is just how I see it, I'm no figure drawing expert by any means:
- Shade more
- Everything is too wide, especially her face/head, which makes it appear flat.
- Bring the arms in closer to the body.
- Her hands are about the right size, but the fingers need to be longer.
- The hip - knee sections of her legs are too long, and the right leg is longer than the left.
- Draw another foot. I know you were satisfied with whichever side you drew first, but they shouldn't be identical.
- The boobs are ok, but the underboob lines shouldn't be that long. (I included this little chart from pixiv to help with boobs)
- Tighten your lines up, make them straighter and thinner. Vary up your use of thick lines and thin lines.
- Even everything out. Make sure the eyes are level and both looking the same way. An easy way to do this is to cover one of her eyes and see if the other is looking the same direction. Your eyes are fine though.
Don't be afraid to use references when you're drawing figures, and try starting out with some thumbnail sketches.
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