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>>126
Well, you're pretty hard on yourself, but that's not a bad thing (unless you take it too far). Being able to analyze your works and figuring out where you came up short is a valuable skill.
I was okay with the mirror state of water. If you think about it in terms of actual seas then yeah it's weird. I wanted to comment on it even, except there's one 'but': it's kind of how most people handle it in such landscape pictures to begin with, a standard of sorts. I see it all the time and as such it doesn't bother me and I don't feel it looks off.
As a rule of thumb rocks might be easier to draw but since your lines are a little washed out and not sharp it's actually not easy to make the rocks look the part. That's why I pointed out the foreground ones look good. The far background aren't on the same level but they're still perfectly fine. What comes in the middle looks a bit too soft, and yeah the shape feels off too.
I think the clouds are fine really. If I had any complaints about the sky is that perhaps - and I'm not even sure, unfortunately I'm the type who has to see things side by side to pick what's better, doing so in my head never works - it would be better if the gradation of the lighting was more gradual. That's how it looks to the right of the lighthouse - small steps. But it feels like you ran out of patience at some point and then the steps get very large.
As for perspective, to a laic it means little, and I think that's how it is for most people. If they saw things side by side they could tell you that the one with proper perspective is better, but if they can't they won't notice. I might be projecting a little but I think it's mostly true.
To sum things up a bit: the first time you posted the greyscale picture I was happy about it, but mostly because of the fact that you drew something for this board. It wasn't bad - frankly I really wish I could draw something anywhere close to that level - but it wasn't great. The second picture I find good, full stop. Not 'good for /lh/' or 'good when compared', just good. Gotta give credit where it's due.
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