I gotta say, I'm really not a big fan of scene type fashion at all but I thought I'd give this a shot anyway.
10 seems out of place being as it's a uniform and there's not much room for personalization there. The uniform itself looks nice but I discounted the score on that one because of the punk type bag.
just as with 10, 8 seems a bit out of place as well, and I just can't say no to a maid outfit, but I'm not that crazy about the stripes.
5 as well is just a uniform, a secretary perhaps?
14, 11 and 9 would be at the top of my list. Don't think the boots on 14 are working (not really much for boots) something red would have made the outfit perfect in my opinion. 11 is really nice but feels like it's maybe missing something, possibly an accessory? hard to say what I would change with 9.
1, 4 and 18 feel like decent efforts that just don't pay off as well as they could.
2, 6, 7, 13, 15 are just way too trashy, all over the place, or flat out silly for my tastes. Some of those look like the result of a girl getting dressed after going blind, picking clothing items at random, or both.