Autumn wind blowing
Red and yellow leaves dancing...
You and I strolling

Charming fragrance
I feel blessed to have met you
You're simply divine

Thunder and lightning
Your elegance is unmatched
I am one with you

Centuries go by,
Insanity rots our hearts,
Yet love never fades.

>>138

Instead of Violet I should have written Purple, my mistake.

Osaka is love.
My sweet waifu forever.
Sata-Andagi!

Your steadfast courage
Loving clumsy guardian
My gentle angel

Silver-haired beauty.
Elegant in every way.
The perfect meido.

Surrounded by freaks.
Youkai, Witches and Mikos.
The only pure girl.


Scarlet Devil's Maid.
Knife-throwing mistress of time.
Oi, hands off, China.

I don't like haiku
They're too restrictive and dumb
I'm sorry, Tenshi

Sweet kind and peaceful
Eyes that sparkle like the stars
Always adoring

radiant beauty
How I do wish to hold you
So soft warm and nice

So very far away
Near my heart but out of reach
Fated to be apart

>>936
It does not have to be a haiku.

>>945
But wasn't what he wrote a haiku?

>>946
But I also said you could write something other than a haiku.

>>948
I know, I was just being lol so clevur

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A sight of blue fire, with weasel's red locks,
like pure air, refuels me: a burn on my lungs.
In summer's stupor, I found myself clung
to memories blurring (a tic from the clock)...

A loud voice kept mocking
my ways of grown old:
the drinking, the smoking
—the child sure was bold.

Her lecturing flooding
while standing alone,
I just listened muting
for she won't be gone...

If days are all empty, they better be done.
Let's meet only sunsets, my blue eyed red sun.

Your eyes make me lose
my ability to count
correctly for syllables.

This is an early draft. This'll be a 5-7-5*7-7, typical of a tanka, but you could ignore the two 7-units after the typical 5-7-5 to make it somewhat like a haiku. Do be offended by my choice of words. Anything in bold is obviously to be taken seriously, as it's not in opposites.

I hate you the most
You are the impurest hate
Such imperfection

Your blemishes dishearten
My unmatched hatred for you

I'm fine with my choice of 5-7-5 for the most part, though it seems a little off, but my 7-7 seems a little iffy.

>>1003
Congratulations, you've won this week's haiku award!

when your blue eyes blaze
in the sands, when we link hands
no pain, no fear; love

I see her on stage
She's my favorite idol
She who is my wife

It's so pathetic
I am enamored with her
I should get out more.

>>1087
Best

As I lie rotting,
Returning back to the earth,
Won't you hold my hand?

Gentle eyes looking for me.
A sweet smile says "you´re at home."
I will never leave again.

Her name's Ayumu
Also known as Osaka
She gives off such light

Dimensions apart,
But eternally loving,
Our hearts are as one.

A sublime flower,
Too weak to bloom beautiful,
Crushed in deep dark blue.

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We're so much alike
and yet so different, still
I love her so much

Your boyish fire
Is only a part of you
Your wholeness, I love.

Glasses girl, oh you.
Will you read with me, darling?
Yes, my love...




Edited because i can't count

Post edited on 19th Jul 2011, 8:19am

Patchouli Knowledge
My love for you will always
Be only for you.

You, my knowing saint
Truly crystallized beauty
But non-existent

Do not worry, girl.
I know you are a jackass.
But I love you, right?

Red moon lights the night
My sinner on black train tracks
Transcending her past

>>6836
That sounds like something somebody would say to me. Except for the "girl" part, of course.

>>953
Those last two lines are pretty incredible. Do you have other stuff that you've written?

I've never written haiku before (excepting the other one I posted here), and it's actually pretty fun. They're short enough that you can roll one around in your head all day and let it take shape without writing it down.

Snow falls, on feathers
that you left within the walls
I'll follow you soon

>>6861
Thank you very much... the answer is no: the few other poetry stuff I keep, from years ago, is incomplete and not in english. Just, if you want, here's the "better" version (San Valentine's) of the same one: http://tohno-chan.com/mai/arch/res/1351.html (BTW: I still don't know how to chan-link to /arc/ (if it's even possible). If someone could make this clear for me, I'd really appreciate it).