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Well shit, it's much harder than I thought it'd be. Coming up with just an intersting premise is hard, not to mention coming up with actually decent plot development. None of the stuff I came up with is suitable for anime but a promise is a promise so here goes:
1) Guy has to make X people sign a Faustian bargain (I just realized English doesn't use a much more convenient word - cirograph) to achieve something. Obviously we're talking about an anti-hero type and we want the audience to symphatize with him a little but ultimately condemn him for his actions. To deepen the moral questions let's say he has got a termianlly ill imuoto and he's doing it for her sake. Oh yeah, I just had another idea. Let's say he has to make 5 people sign but after finiding the fourth one he sings it himself. So is he ultimately a good guy or a bad guy?
Obviously it wouldn't work well if he can just somehow trick complete strangers into doing it. The way people actually agree to the deal itself is somewhat problematic, too. Asking them whether they'd be willing to accept eternal damnation just for the sake of an ill person they don't even know wouldn't really work. I think making them sing organ donor cards would be a good way out. It would also prove they're good people (because making bad people suffer wouldn't be really despicable). As to why they can't just get it from a donor bank and why he's running around asking people to donate some organs let's say both his sister and the person in question have got the AB- blood type. So he'll have to get to know them, act friendly towards them and then trick them into signing it.
OR we could make the Devil himself appoint the people he has to convince. Let's say the first person the Devil appoints is actually a bad guy. A raptist, a child molestor, a murderer, you name it. Of course the organ donor thing wouldn't work anymore but let's say just getting their signature would be enough here. I think most people wouldn't really object to the idea of making a bad person the target so at this point it might still look like the protagonist is a good guy at heart. The Devil always appoints people he knows but they don't have to be close to him - a person from his school whose name he doesn't even know, his neighbour whom he hates either way, a clerk from local shop. That would make 4. By now it's pretty obvious that he's not-so-good at all. The fifth would be someone who actually means a lot to him - his best friend for example. Then he decides to sign it himself.
We could also give up on the 'eternal damnation' thing and switch it to something ... well, not as horrible (because even if it was a bad person I wouldn't exactly want them to suffer for that long - just a litle is fine). Let's say everybody who agrees to the deal dies after a week. So, the order could be: a raptist, a terminally ill person (late stage cancer - he's/she's gonna die anyway, right? Is it okay to steal 3 moths from him/her for the sake of his siter? The protagonist could start getting delusional here trying to justify his actions - 'the last month will be terrible for him/her either way, I'm just lessening his/her suffering'), a person from his school he doesn't know and again, someone who's close to him.
Different approach: the Devil appoints two people and he has to pick one. This time there's little to no doubt that the protagonist is a good person (let's give the audience some cheesy flashbacks about how he does charity work or something). First guy remains the same, second is the same, too (as in, a terminally ill person and someone else - he decides to go with the terminally ill person with the same delusional attitude) but the third decision is a though one. Both people seem to be good and he doesn't want to make ether of them die. He actually ponders whether he should quit. Then he discovers something about one of them that didn't catch his attention at first (it should be a relatively minor offense) and since he was looking for this kind of opening he goes with it after giving it a little thought. Again, at this point the audience begins to second guess his actions. The fourth case is even worse, as he doesn't even look for faults anymore. He just picks the old, bitter guy with no relatives, 'because noone will miss him either way'. For the fifth decision he will have to choose between himself and his best friend (or even the ill sister in question). After a week of being close to losing his mind (yeah, I know it doesn't work that way but it looks good in all kinds of media) he decides that he want back off now and that he'll sacrifice himself. Then, at the last moment he changes his decision ('like hell I'm gonna die'). BAD END
Or something like that. A lot of it is highly contradictionary but I came up with it as I wrote. Needs some refining but I think it has some potential.
2) Fictional modern day setting. A state suffers because corrupt politicians do whatever they fucking feel like doing. The poor citizens de from starvation while the privileged don't do anything and live in luxury. One man decides to change it and begins his election campaign. After he finally gets elected he tries to change the system but after some failures he becomes part of ht esystem, afraid to lose his privileges.
3) A doctor who lost his license works for mafia. The stuff he does is not exactly praise worthy (for example he removes organs from perfectly heatlhy people). Then, he falls in love and for the sake of his relationship he decides to cut his ties with the undergroun. But it's not exactly as easy as it seemed to be.
Overall, I'm sure you noticed I'm tired of Gary-Stu protagonists. Goddammit Japan, just adapt Akumetsu already.
Pic somewhat related.
4) A bland guy with no mentionworthy charm points suddenly gets surrounded by a crowd of grils: a tsundere, a kuudere, genki girl, seitokaichou, osanajimi... Also includes maids, aliens, robots, magicians, espers, obligatory hot springs/beach episode... Damn, I think I might really be on to something!
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