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Just because something is foreshadowed to occur doesn't mean it's any less a deus ex machina.
In any event, when I said story, I meant something of a climax, my apologies. While episode 1 did introduce the two organizations, nothing really came of it until episode 2. Yes, 1 did show they are somewhat at odds in collecting these powerful artifacts, and the Fang organization was made out as bad because they valued ends over means, but other than that, nothing else came from episode 1.
But that's not a problem at all.
I'm just going to name things off the top of my head, because I've finished watching another anime series, so my memory might be a little muddled than it was when I made that post.
When Ryuuji was hit with Kei's Dragon Claw, it was suddenly revealed that Rose's breath had magical panacea powers, able to instantly regenerate even destroyed organs.
When Onyx first became an issue, Ryuuji's big-breasted second cousin led him to this magical Dragon Tooth Dagger that he tried to use once before but couldn't. So he tries again, and this time, presumably since he has someone (a dragon) he wants to protect, it works.
So on way to the Tower, Ryuuji is able to use the Dragon Dagger to eliminate the forcefield thing with a single swing. Why?
When dealing with the engagement necklace, which it seems have been used by the entire race of Black Dragons since time immemorial, that plotline was entirely undone by Ryuuji simply tapping the necklace with his dagger, vaporizing it. Why was such an important and magical item destroyed by a weapon made from a tooth? Onyx' reaction, and previous words about how only he (presumably read as, black dragon) could remove it, showed that it was not something that should have happened, and, really, there's no explanation for it. Ryuuji, a human, effectively annulled the engagement of two dragons using a dagger made from a tooth. Furthermore, how did he know that could be done? The dagger itself didn't glow as it did in the helicopter, he just looked at it and knew he could do anything with it.
Fighting Onyx, Ryuuji's Dragon Dagger was able to block Onyx' attacks. Now, okay, dragon vs dragon tooth, I can accept this. Then Rose joins in with her fire and the two of them push back Onyx' black dragon mist stuff.
Now, what happens next isn't a Deus ex Machina, but still a major shift. Previously, Onyx stated that he wants to marry Rose because dragons get a major power boost via a ritual, but it requires absolute trust in each other (ignoring that Rose hates him and effectively wants him dead), but after the engagement presumably gets annulled, he threatens to kill her if she doesn't marry him. Now, this I can chalk up to pride; bride runs off with a human, now I have to kill her for insulting me. Okay. But then he goes on a tirade about how humans and dragons can't be together, and how the two races are bound to hate each other; entirely off from his I want more power! goal before.
Regardless, Onyx is pissed off, so then shifts into maximum overdrive and turns into his dragon form, whereupon the dagger became entirely useless, not even able to scratch Onyx' dragon hide/scales.
Wondering what to do, I presume that Ryuuji and Rose become engaged in the Red Dragons' way, and Ryuuji receives a powerup, despite nothing really showing that Onyx ever received such a thing from being engaged to a dragon. And if it's just a human+dragon bonus, that kind of undermines Onyx' entire spiel about dragons and humans not meant to be, especially considering this all went on right in front of his eyes, and they 'engaged' while he was looking.
In any event, after getting his power up, the dagger seemed to have taken on the aspect of a red dragon and sent enough fire back at OnyxDragon to not only push back his blackdragonfire attack, but defeat him utterly with only one swing. WHY? Even if it combined their powers, Rose is still a newborn dragon, relative to Onyx, and even with Ryuuji's supa-rare level 10 whatever he is that the anime never went into, how where they able to defeat a fully grown black dragon? Even if Ryuuji is a supa-rare level 10 whatever he is, he is still a human. And even though Rose is a red dragon that may or may not be more powerful than a black dragon, she's still a baby compared to Onyx. There has been nothing suggested to show that, by their powers combined, the two of them could defeat him, and it really just came out of no where, with the stupid Dragon Tooth Dagger as the catalyst.
Now, I've not read the manga or LN to know the story, and maybe the story in itself makes sense and lacks glaring holes, but in such a case, this adaptation is terrible, plotwise.
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